Audience Feedback

As we felt that our old narrative did not work, we decided to make a new one. As you can see from the video above, here is an audience member watching our old edited trailer. Her reaction wasn't the reaction we intended to get.We want our audience to be scared and frightened at what they saw in our trailer. I believe that this clip shows us where we need to improve. The feedback we got was that we needed better lighting and more of an enigma code as it wasn't very clear. She also felt that the villain could have been a lot more scary. However, she liked the villain's hidden identity as it was a typical horror aspect.