Feedback From Audience Regarding The First Storyline

Here is feedback from an audience member that previously watched our old edited trailer. She told us that she'd give the trailer a two out of five stars which I believe is poor. She told us that what we can do to improve our trailer is by making it flow and actually have a clear storyline as she wasn't able to make clear of what our storyline was. It wasn't apparent at all. She also said that we need to work on our shots by having fast cuts and a lot of close ups in order to make it scary. This feedback really helped and was useful. This will allow my group and I to make our trailer successful.